Overall my review for my digital piece went well, we had to talk about our theme, stratagies we used, experimentation and presentation of the video.
With regards to improving my digital piece to make it even better the comments i got were as follows:
– sort out the sound to make sure it all matches, make it cleaner and flowing
– add more audio and photos to make it longer
– take out my voice from the piece completely, make it specifically about Jo
– double check the transitions to make sure they flow
Plan for the next few weeks..
– have a back up plan for narrative book piece as idea is not reliable
– keep shooting photos
– carry on research
– organise time effectively for deadline as I will miss out on a week due to work experience
– go to InDesign workshops to see how a book can be put together
– research book types to suit my theme